It should say as follows...
''My time on this earth is limited , but (!) since I'm still young you should take a time out from the stress of growing up and enjoy and evening out being social !! You don't have to call me everyday , but I'm waiting for you to take me to the place where the music plays !!! Sincerely (______)"
"P.S. In case you're confused , I'm asking you out"
''My time on this earth is limited , but (!) since I'm still young you should take a time out from the stress of growing up and enjoy and evening out being social !! You don't have to call me everyday , but I'm waiting for you to take me to the place where the music plays !!! Sincerely (______)"
"P.S. In case you're confused , I'm asking you out"